
02-05-2007, 05:51 PM
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Well when i read it the first time i was very aware that the conversation kinda stopped and the rest began. But when I went back and re-read it, I didnt seem to notice it so much. So I don't know whether I was maybe skim-reading a little, which made it jump...
*sighs* I guess I'll just HAVE to go back and read it again...
And get writing boy! Or it'll be me doing the complaining... 
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