I read your story and I liked it so much that became part of the forums just to tell you so. Was just looking for a quick read to make me horny, but your story... well i started to read it, got engrossed but didnt have time to finish it that night. So all through the next day I was thinking about it, wondering where it was leading. Got home and read the rest... Mmmmmm... so much bettter than a "quick-fix". When I read that you'd actually cut the sex scene down I scrolled up to see how long it had actually been. It certainly didn't drag out, I didn't even notice it was as long as that. And everything was so much better for the build up. So much better. Maybe that's just me though.

So yeh, loved it... Do you need me to revert to my usual ego-deflating self in order to get your head through the doorway? :P