I like the story, but I'm confused.

In the story Ruby is talking to "him" and she tells him that she's going to meet her best friend Allison today at Starbucks.

Then this is what is in the story:
"After spending some time chatting and enjoying their time together, Ruby knew it was time to get down to business. She looked Julie dead in the eyes and said “I’m horny. I need you, right now”."

??

Other than that its GOOD stuff.