I suppose pretty much anything could use some kind of work. If not improvement, maybe just a tweak to make it more appealing to those it's not to right now.

As far as I'm concerned...bras helped shape one of my strongest attractions in life! Literally. ha ha I LOVE boobies!

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Though I am different from you,
We were born involved in one another.

For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul.

Complete surrender should not just come at moments in which one faces overwhelming odds, but in the calm when it seems one is personally in complete control of one's life.