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Lilith 01-24-2007 05:32 PM

Hypothetically Speaking
 
I'd love to be the vixen.

Truly a hot tail... er I mean some kind'a hot tale ;)

wyndhy 01-25-2007 09:35 AM

i wonder if there's any guys...friends maybe...who'd want to be the two guys you'd vixenize. :blink:
:D

thanks again ((lil)). it always gives me nice warm fuzzies when someone tells me they enjoyed a story.

IowaMan 01-25-2007 10:34 AM

Suppose I just read your story wyndhy, I'd be hard as a rock. Hypothetically speaking of course. ;)

Could I be coaxed into something like that? Hmmmmmm, let me give that one some thought.

wyndhy 01-25-2007 01:56 PM

think long and think hard, iowa.
:D

and thanks for reading!!

Coaster 01-25-2007 02:59 PM

Mmmmmmmmm... wyndhy.... could you sit on me like in your AV?

Great tail milkmaid!!!

Irezumi Kiss 01-25-2007 03:06 PM

Hypothetically speaking, after a cock-hardening tale like that, I might need some hypodermically speaking attention...

...oh nurrrrse... :sex:

wyndhy 01-25-2007 04:44 PM

mmmm. i'm gettin those warm fuzzies again. ;)

thank you, boys!!

osuche 02-11-2007 07:07 PM

Story was awesome! Thank you...

wyndhy 02-12-2007 09:59 AM

very cool! thanks, osuche. *x*

i must admit, i'm super happy (and relieved) a few people liked it. sometimes...well usually :o...i write stuff that makes perfect sense in my head (especially when i experiment with non-traditional POV’s or do this "talking directly to the reader" thing i’ve been into with my last couple stories) and as i'm writing it, i'm positive that the tone that i tried to convey came across well, but when i go back to it later, i'm not so sure that i didn't just make it a really shitty story or one that's just plain too hard to read; like things i thought were obvious or funny or sensible that just ended up lost and confused in my characteristic over-use of punctuation, run-on sentences, and common speech syntax as opposed to the “rules of proper grammar."

as always, for those of you not so impressed, criticism is welcome...nae! encouraged. except for the typos :p:D...i wish i were better at proofing my own stuff but i'm going to make a better effort at it in the future, take more time with my writing and not just put it on paper as fast as i can 'cause it feels like this frenzied race to get it all out of my head...like i'm afraid i'll forget what i wanted to type. and i will really read it over in as much of an unattached manor as i can manage...maybe step away from it for a few days before i come back to proof...no matter how much it barks at the doggie-door of my brain.


shiii...i'm not even sure that ^^^ made sense :p...and - as usual - i wrote too much.

WildIrish 02-12-2007 04:01 PM

Ok...that works for me. :D


Now, about this carpet. :yikes:

wyndhy 02-12-2007 05:12 PM

can't help ya there. :D

glad you enjoyed, WI. thanks! :x:

cellaphanepants 07-16-2010 09:49 AM

Outstanding!
 
I don't know why this is the first time I've read this story. I've read others of yours, but none have floored me, or made me rise, like this one.

Maybe it was the meter, or the pace at which it read, but my heart was beating fast, sweat was beading on my forehead, and my breathe came in gasps and chills with the multiple orgasms of my mind.

Brava!

You do have a way with words.

wyndhy 07-16-2010 11:37 AM

aw shucks. thanks!

Aqua 07-16-2010 12:53 PM

I confess, I don't recall reading this story before... and damn I think I'd remember if I had, so I must have missed it.

I loved this line...
Quote:
He’d prod her with the distended crown of his up-til-now denied cock, using twists and pivots that’d make Elvis look like Ed Grimley.....I must say.

:rofl:

Humor aside... :hot::hot::hot: story!

wyndhy 07-16-2010 06:29 PM

hehe. i remember snorting when i wrote that. i am sooooo glad you thought it was sexy but i absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE that it made you laugh.:x:


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