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Pita	08-19-2006 12:37 PM

Feedback: Owning Pita

My Joe and I are writing a novel together. It is a BDSM romance about a couple just beginning their real life D/s relationship together. In the first chapter Joe fly's to Pita and returns to New England with her. The flight is especially "interesting" :)

I hope you will take the time to read this first chapter. The second chapter should be posted in 3 or 4 weeks.

Thanks!!

Owning Pita

wyndhy

09-09-2006 09:09 PM

whoa! great story!

i love the style and the writing is skillful (which always makes a story wayyy more enjoyable to me).

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