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denandbil

03-16-2006 02:38 PM

My first story, Bitten.

Hi all,

I would appreciate any comments or suggestions on my story writing. For those of you who haven't read it yet, it's in Boy/Girl and called.....you guessed it.....Bitten!

Bitten

Lilith

03-16-2006 05:03 PM

I read it. Nice work.

sassee

03-17-2006 06:35 AM

Very nice. I enjoyed it. :]

denandbil

03-17-2006 03:15 PM

Thanks Lilith and Sassee. I appreciate your comments. :)

tkarvelis

03-26-2006 12:18 AM

Enjoyed it

I enjoyed your story too. I could imagine the kitchen and the two lovers... It worked for me, and would love a part 2

denandbil

04-02-2006 03:24 PM

Thanks Tkarvelis, Maybe there will be a part 2. :rolleyes:

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