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fzzy 04-25-2005 08:38 PM

Need help with a writing project!!
 
This isn't an erotic story per se ... but I've been working on my own version of the great american novel for awhile now .... and I'm stuck at a crucial point in the end ... need some brainstorming help ... no idea too silly, etc. because even if it doesn't work, it might just bring another thought to mind .... so anyone that would like to help, just chime right in ....

without going into too much of the story .... my "hero" has got to rescue his sister and his girlfriend's mother from kidnappers ... who kidnapped them in order to get him to use his ability in developing a medicinal cure and turning it over to them ....

But I'm having a difficult time in figuring out how he figures out where they are or how to get them out of the situation ... anyone have any ideas to throw at me ... like I say, nothing is too silly or boring or .... because if it doesn't work, it may lead to an idea that does ..... HELP! :)

Lilith 04-25-2005 09:13 PM

psychic intervention

he makes a fake cure and turns it over

he trades his self for their release

calls on old buddy who was a private detective ( buddy later bones sister :D)

girlfriend's mom seduces kidnappers and sister escapes

ex girlfriend at the phone company traces phone calls that lead to kidnapper



Just brainstorming

osuche 04-25-2005 11:04 PM

What about bloodhounds tracking their spoor?

A carrier pigeon?

fzzy 04-26-2005 02:42 AM

love the comments and thoughts ... serious and joking ones ... all may prove helpful in getting my brain in geer again! x's Fzzy

thereIam 04-26-2005 02:57 AM

You could always have your "hero" contact John Walsh. America's Most Wanted has a track record...

wyndhy 04-26-2005 08:57 AM

the ever classic "noises in the background of a phone call"...a distinctive bell chime, a train whistle, a clock tower, a corner hot dog stand owner's peculiar yet familiar voice.

i always like the idea of a woman who doesn't need a big stong man to save her....maybe the women could rescue themselves using their wits, seductive skills and ample charms ;) just as he (hero) arrives to rescue them.

lakritze 04-26-2005 12:53 PM

Kidnappers send video of mom and girlfriend to hero. but unknown to kidnappers,mom and girlfriend are using sign language to tell hero their location.Just a thought.Always worked for me.heh heh

Steph 09-14-2005 03:58 PM

I missed this thread the last time & wondered how they were finally rescued. :)

LixyChick 09-14-2005 04:15 PM

Oh Man! Nice *BUMP* Steph...^5! I missed it too!

So yeah...how'd things go fzzy?

fzzy 09-15-2005 12:57 AM

I love you all!!!!!!!!! (Lixy ... sorry I think I used up some of your ! quota - LOL)

still trying to work it out ... life has been very hectic at my place the last 3 months so haven't really gotten to the creative writing stuff .... but it's there in the back of my head all of the time ... so any other suggestions someone might think up .... please, I'd love to hear them as well! :) x's


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