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Lilith

03-14-2005 07:17 PM

The Visitor by Roxiebda

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Great story! When I read the line "charge of the lust brigade" I nearly shot iced tea out my nose!

Thanks for sharing it with us!

fzzy	03-14-2005 09:43 PM

Yep, excellent story ... I especially enjoyed the underlying humor going through the entirety. Welcome to Pixies!

roxiebda

03-15-2005 06:56 AM

Thanks!

Thanks so much guys, I am always a little nervous about others reading my work, but want to get feedback so that I can improve!

I love your site, it is erotic fiction heaven! I feel like a child in a Candies 'R Us! Lol! Don't know where to start, and want to read everything at once!

Thanks again for the encouragement!

wyndhy

03-15-2005 12:31 PM

yep, yep! great story, roxie

roxiebda

03-15-2005 06:31 PM

Thanks Wyndhy,

I appreciate you taking the time to respond, and am very glad you liked it!

Cheers,

Roxi

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