Requesting feedback on Bedhopping
 

I was wondering if anyone would like to give me feedback on Bedhopping.

After all, it's not often that I write a story where only two people are having sex, they aren't related, and one of them is male. ;-)

-NastyGuy

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Other stories by NastyGuy:
Oops (Incestous lesbian)
Merry Fucking Christmas (Group sex/Cheating spouses)
The Dare: Shannon's Story (1st time/FFM)
Way off Broadway (Masturbation show)