Feedback on Mina's Prelude
 

Hi, I'd appreciate all the feed back, positive or negative on my first story: Mina's Prelude

This story, even though in the group category, does not have any sexual occurances. It is a story of how I met Mina, and how it will go on. Probably, I should have posted at the interactive stories but I have my own story too

Cute story. I hope it's happily ever after.