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Lilith 12-29-2003 12:15 AM

Familiarity
 
Fabulous!!!!!


I really liked your very relaxed style of writing. It seemed honest and true, nothing seemed forced or inplausible. Loved the thought you leave us with. Lovely!

Nik Satyr 01-07-2004 10:18 PM

Re: Familiarity
 
Thank you very much Lilith. You are too kind. It's sort of a love letter to a former lover and, in essence. true. My next story will be far more fictionalized but I will try for the same realistic tone.

Thanks again

NIK

Steph 01-08-2004 03:45 AM

The last line was beautiful.

Eliza 01-10-2004 01:51 AM

That was a great story! Erotic..hot and tender all at the same time! Wonderfull job!

~Eliza


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