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Clowning Around
Hey all!
My first story *clowning around* is my first attempt at raunchy writing. I was just wondering if anyone had any tips, opinions, etc.. Just to let me know what they thought of it, if I should give up completely or write some more! I'd also be curious to know what people prefer topic wise for erotic literature. Thanks all! Hope someone gets a kick out of it :D |
made me hot and horny
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Very nice - I enjoyed it! definitely made my pussy wet!
I like your writing style - you manage to capture the desire and passion he felt for that girl - thats what really gets me horny. I've written a story too - well started a thread in the interactive section - its called First Time Bi Girl - I'd love to know what you thought of my story. :) Siobhan |
thanks for the feedback siobhan!
I was beginning to think my story must have been pretty crap for no-one to have responded! I'll take a look at your story.....I love reading other peoples stuff...it's a way to constantly keep up on writing styles and what people are interested in! :D |
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