Poetry
 

I'm not sure if this has been done before, but is there an interest in Pixie land for poets/poetry?. I wrote what follows as another way of expressing my fascination with all things sexual.

Breathing deep and turning over
Her arm falls draped across his chest,
Their bodies lie completely sated
Enveloped in contented rest.
The sweat-stained sheets bear silent witness
To an eager passionate embrace.
When she took him fully in her.
When he gently kissed her face.
Their bodies heaved as one together
Harmonizing rhythmic sighs,
Moans and groans of urgent pleasure
She bit his hand to stifle cries.
And then she felt his muscles pulsing
As he reached climactic goal,
Her willing lust coursing through her,
All consuming. Body and soul.
And now each one entwined with t’other
Dreams of when they both will stir
And once again they’ll feast together
She on him and he on her.

Three thumbs up!!
 

Excellent Poem Glyndwr!
Loved it!

The Midnight's Kiss
 

Damn!
 

Now I have a new favorite thing...sexy poetry. I loved them both! I love the fact that they were sensual not just sexual. Sex is such a sensory experience and to be able to write so beautifully descriptive about it is a gift! I look forward to reading more...:) ~~~~~~~~~>Lilith

Those are Great! They are both fine pieces of work... like Lilith said, very sensual.
(And since Diva doesn't really have a third thumb, she can hold up my cock... ;) )

Re: Poetry
 

I was wondering that, too. I searched the story area and found there was no erotic poetry section. :( I'm not sure how hard it is to add a board/Area to a bulletin board site, but would a poetry section be enjoyed here? I know I'd like it.


~Linds

I think a poetry section sounds like a great idea! I love what's been posted in this thread so far... Something about poetry allows for a much 'thicker' description --- the imagery can be so much more intense when it doesn't have to fit together literally. And the form allows a great deal of freedom... So yes, I say, let's have a poetry section!!! I might even have to dig out some of my own work to share there too, if there's enough interest!

--- sweetstuff

Love Letters from a sub...
 

Love Letters from a sub, part II...
 

Excellent
 

I had never realised the power of erotic peotry - these are wow.......and beautifully sensual.

I will be looking forward to more.

Thanks for starting the thread Glyndwr!

Not exactly the Erotic vein, but.....
 

~No apology~

I'd say I was sorry
For causing such a stir
But honestly I did not know
Exactly where you were

The long night of drinking
Had my inner compass bent
I meant to exit camp, and pee
Then sneak back to my tent

I would like to apologize
For pissing on your hubby Jim
But you and I know very well-
That man wasn't him.

Oh, well... here's another weak attempt...
 

Standing silent once spoken the words became broken

as she offered a token by removing a shoe.

He had erred only slightly at her request of the nightly

And the room had too brightly exposed his “snafu.”



He apparently expected too much, but rejected

His mistake was projected from an inner-self storm.

She passed him his clothes as she buried her nose

In her hands the noise rose as she laughed at his bare form.



(been there)

She mounts him bravely.
Her nipples erect, blushes.
Her body shudders.

When Passion Cried
 

A practical joke?

They thought that might be her answer
She’s reaching out and wanting help
Whether the first time was real or not, she will understand
And in the end she will laugh,
They know her so well, after all.

It shall be one to free her of guilt and lies
Distract her broken heart
Put a smile on her face, happiness in her heart
And in the end she will laugh,
They know her so well, after all.

It shall heal, mend and free her very soul
Teach her self-awareness, self-acceptance and self-control
Disguise it with her own passions, desires, and needs
And in the end she will laugh,
They know her so well, after all.

Disregard her emotions, ignore her tears
Damn any rules, they will all have fun
It’s only a joke, who cares how it’s done.
And in the end she will laugh,
They know her so well, after all.

A practical joke?

Her mind spins, her eyes question
Distrust sets in giving way to a disbelieving heart
Withdraw, retreat and silence once again
In the end it wasn’t real, she learned of the joke, she cried
Yes they know her so well, after all.

Guilt was used, lies were added upon to gain her trust
Have her repeat her story, break her heart once more
The smile froze, the heart stopped
In the end it wasn’t real, she learned of the joke, she cried
Yes they know her so well, after all.

Healing with false passion, mending with magic tricks, her soul with empty promises
A lesson of shameful lust, non-acceptance and losing control
Rejecting her dreams of passions, desires and needs.
In the end it wasn’t real, she learned of the joke, she cried
Yes they know her so well, after all.

Continuous tearing of her emotions, never blind to her tears
Damn the rules, she did too, she should be having fun
What difference should it make if this time was all arranged
In the end it wasn’t real, she learned of the joke, she cried
Yes they know her so well, after all.

A practical joke?

She looks through eyes seeing nothing, the tears dry up
She moves about feeling nothing, the heart now closed
Her mind still reeling in disbelief at the cruelty
Because in the end it wasn’t real, and she doesn’t understand the joke
They know her not, they never will.

Tammi,
 

A very heartfelt poem.... describes very well how it feels to be wounded. Thanks for sharing~~~~~~~~>Lilith

Hi Tammi

Very moving

The Seduction
 

Beautiful......
 

beautiful Tigress, sensual and mmmmmm............so erotic

Very well spoken Tigress, and sensual as well as erotic.. ;)

I like it a lot! :D

Wow, there's some fantastic writing posted here! It's so inspiring --- in all the best senses of the word! ;) Hooray for all the PixiePoets!!!

You've all inspired me to drag out some of my writing... It's not exactly erotic, although it hovers on the edge. I guess most of it qualifies more as 'sensual' than as 'erotic' --- hope it's appropriate here anyway.

--- sweetstuff

If your sketches are any kind of indicator, I'm sure your writing will be well received also! ;)

the scent of you

the scent of you
drifts into me
delirium
my altered consciousness
telescopes
you become
horizon
foreground
the whole picture
the landscape in your eyes
is suddenly
the only one I see
and the warm heartbeat
of your arm
around me
the gentle weight
anchors me to you
otherwise
I would fly
spinning
out of control
lost in the universe
of your smile

mmmmmmm.... I think I'm melting... ;) That was beautiful and moving Sweetstuff. *sigh*

your breath

your breath on my neck
my fingers along your spine
my heart in yours
your quivering devotion
my naked elation
your soft skin
your hard tongue
your heartbeat thundering
mine too
my life on fire
my love
I love
the feel of you
my hunger
your excitement
our love

Hips grinding obscenely.
Orgasmic waves receding.
She smiles happily.

Nubian ---

I love your writing! Your poems are so much the opposite of my own in form, but you capture very well the kind of sensuality and vivid imagery that I only aim for... I'm in awe! Please, keep writing, and keep sharing your work!

--- sweetstuff

Thanks SFC. I am really touched that you enjoy my (admittedly amateurish) attemp at Haiku.

Nubian
 

I am a freak for all types of Haiku. Mine fall in the realm of nature but sex being natural I guess I may have to try a few too. Keep up the good work.......~~~~~~~~~~>Lilith

(Here's where we veer away from the erotic and land more completely in the realm of the sensual and romantic... Hope you all enjoy this anyway.)

illumination

he laughs you into sunshine
alone you are
depthless
as a grey day
monotone
but the moment
he opens his indigo eyes
mundanity shatters
you are
a technicolour rainbow
in your eyes
vibrant colour
saturates the room
and even
unbelievably
swirls into you
suddenly
you believe
in beauty
his brilliant love
shines from your eyes
and you are sunlight
he is laughter
together you are joy

Thanks Lilith
 

Look forward to seing some of your work, natural or otherwise.

To my Wife
 

Eyes ever inviting,
Tongue eternally probing,
Bodies meshed in Love.

The First Time
 

Sweetstuff, I must say I love your poetry... ;)

Glyndwr:
 

Gotta say... I laughed as much as I cringed!
I loved it!

Glyndwr
 

That was wonderful. I could actually picture that and am still laughing. Being a rather clutzy female at times, I have can relate well to that. Thanks for the laugh.

Glyndwr
 

Were you there the first time I attempted to do that as well..... If I remember right it actually ended in bloodshed. I am soooooo glad that practice makes perfect :) You are wonderfully creative!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~>Lilith

Glyndwr --- That was hilarious!!!!

Nubian --- I loved your last poem, as I knew I would. Your work is terrific! Do you have more you could share with us?

And Lilith --- I for one would love to see some of your writing, sex-themed or no. One of the things I love about this place is that it's a chance to share both who we are as sexual beings, and who we are as total beings. Any chance to learn how people Pixies' folk think and live beyond their sexuality makes the sexy stuff so much more colourful and vibrant! Besides, I think you have a natural sense for words and imagery, from what you've posted elsewhere, and I'd love to see how you put it to use in your poetry...



Meanwhile, here are two more of mine...



(This is another sensual but non-erotic one... Love, even when not being expressed sexually, is always a very physical, sensory thing to me.)

goodnight

your face
rumpled with needing sleep
flushed with that ache of tiredness
awakes within me
a sudden softness
and a yearning
to gather you
with blankets
into sleep
to run cool fingers
over your burning eyes
drawing out the wrinkled worries
from your forehead
to curl my limbs against yours
and breathe with you
into serenity
to join heartbeats
in the rocking-chair pulse of dreams
wanting nothing more
than to wake up
beside you
in the expansive warmth
of your smile
forever




(This one dates from 1999, about a month before I started dating my current b/f --- my first and only really serious relationship. I've always thought that the poem conveyed the frustration of inexperience fairly well... It's obviously not as dreamy or idyllic as the other poems I've posted.)

pandora

pandora's box
won't open
her world is good and pure and
terrifyingly bland
cold grey mush
forced down her choking throat
pandora
shakes her box
hears the electric brilliance
of jalepeño lust
a spectacular consuming wish
for desire
another rattle
elicits the serrated crash
of anger
trembling its tension
against the citrus thrill
of jealousy flambé
pandora tears at the lock
fingers bleeding the only colour
in a vile cardboard landscape
she gnaws at a rusted hinge
ravenous for particles
of escaped spice
powdered evil spilled
she smells its exotic promise
but it remains imprisoned
try as she might
pandora's box won't open.