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Glyndwr 01-30-2002 09:13 AM

Hi Tammi

Very moving

Misancha 01-30-2002 11:40 AM

I had never thought of using poetry in such a wild way. The best way to get to the point across to the reader. Lets have more of this sexy literature. well done all of the poets.

xXx Misancha xXx

PlayfulTigress 01-30-2002 12:36 PM

The Seduction
 
~By Lindsay Rae~

I lie awake at the darkest hours of night
I feel the heavy chains of slumber hold me down
As I try to escape my pillowy prison
I shiver, though the room is quite warm
I feel the soft, feathery touch of fingertips
As they glide gently across my skin
Each touch feels like the first time
My breath quickens slightly
As a finger brushes against my nipple
Slowly the fingertips tickle their way up my arm
Leaving goose bumps in their path
They caress my cheek and the side of my neck
Ever so slightly, they travel down my sides
And across my tummy
I can feel the fiery warmth build up inside me
As the fingers play with my curly hair
As if by instinct I part my legs
I offer myself to the sweet seduction
As I have many times before...

xanne 01-30-2002 12:49 PM

Beautiful......
 
beautiful Tigress, sensual and mmmmmm............so erotic

PlayfulTigress 01-30-2002 01:06 PM

Thank you. :o

Aqua 01-30-2002 01:16 PM

Very well spoken Tigress, and sensual as well as erotic.. ;)

I like it a lot! :D

PlayfulTigress 01-30-2002 01:42 PM

Thanks babe. :)

sugarfreecandy 01-30-2002 03:48 PM

Wow, there's some fantastic writing posted here! It's so inspiring --- in all the best senses of the word! ;) Hooray for all the PixiePoets!!!

You've all inspired me to drag out some of my writing... It's not exactly erotic, although it hovers on the edge. I guess most of it qualifies more as 'sensual' than as 'erotic' --- hope it's appropriate here anyway.

--- sweetstuff

Aqua 01-30-2002 03:49 PM

If your sketches are any kind of indicator, I'm sure your writing will be well received also! ;)

sugarfreecandy 01-30-2002 03:51 PM

the scent of you

the scent of you
drifts into me
delirium
my altered consciousness
telescopes
you become
horizon
foreground
the whole picture
the landscape in your eyes
is suddenly
the only one I see
and the warm heartbeat
of your arm
around me
the gentle weight
anchors me to you
otherwise
I would fly
spinning
out of control
lost in the universe
of your smile

Aqua 01-30-2002 03:57 PM

mmmmmmm.... I think I'm melting... ;) That was beautiful and moving Sweetstuff. *sigh*

sugarfreecandy 01-30-2002 04:04 PM

your breath

your breath on my neck
my fingers along your spine
my heart in yours
your quivering devotion
my naked elation
your soft skin
your hard tongue
your heartbeat thundering
mine too
my life on fire
my love
I love
the feel of you
my hunger
your excitement
our love

Nubian 01-30-2002 07:01 PM

Hips grinding obscenely.
Orgasmic waves receding.
She smiles happily.

sugarfreecandy 01-30-2002 07:19 PM

Nubian ---

I love your writing! Your poems are so much the opposite of my own in form, but you capture very well the kind of sensuality and vivid imagery that I only aim for... I'm in awe! Please, keep writing, and keep sharing your work!

--- sweetstuff

Nubian 01-30-2002 07:37 PM

Thanks SFC. I am really touched that you enjoy my (admittedly amateurish) attemp at Haiku.


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