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NastyGuy
06-22-2005, 03:56 PM
Folks-
Here's a challenge for you! Write a lullaby for adults--something that would make you want to stay awake instead of going to sleep!
I have virtually no talent for rhyming or metre, so I'll leave this one to those who do.
-NastyGuy

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Stories by NastyGuy:
Oops (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?t=24202) (Incestous lesbian)
Merry Fucking Christmas (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?t=24023) (Group sex/Cheating spouses)
The Dare: Shannon's Story (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?t=23980) (1st time/FFM)
Way off Broadway (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?p=867019#post867019) (Masturbation show)
Bedhopping (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?p=871095#post871095) (1st time/FM)
The Goldilocks Saga (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?t=24397) (1st time/Group/Chapters)

Lilith
06-22-2005, 05:16 PM
ooooooooooo I like this idea!

Dubblz
06-22-2005, 05:52 PM
I need to get over this pic posting thing first,lol..But..Sounds like a good challenge to me..I'm game!!

Dubblz
06-29-2005, 05:43 PM
Sung to.. Hush Little Baby, Donít Say a Word


Hush little Subbie, youíve said enough..
Master gonna slip on your mink laced cuffs..
And when those cuffs click round your wrist..
Master gonna read off, His wish list..
And on that list, thereís things to do..
Master gonna use them, to pleasure you..
And if at first, I hear complains..
Master gonna tighten your restraints..
And when those restraints, hold you in place..
Master gonna rub His cock, on your face..
And if you open, your mouth real wide..
Master gonna stick His cock, inside..
And if you gag, or even twitch..
Master gonna get out His hickory switch..
And as that switch rubs cross your skin..
Master gonna shove His cock further in..
And if you suck His cock real nice..
Master gonna rub your tits with ice..
And as that ice melts on your nips..
Master gonna pull His cock, from your lips..
And if you talk, or seem to nag..
Master gonna strap on your favorite gag..
And when that gag has stifled your sound..
Master gonna tap His switch, on your mound..
And as your mound gets red and wet..
Master gonna make you really sweat..
And as that sweat forms on your chest..
Master gonna give you the final test..
And if this test, you do not pass..
Master gonna have to, spank your ass..
And when your ass is hot, and red too..
Master gonna slip His cock in you..
And as His cock slides in and out..
Master will release the gag, so you can shout..
And when your shouts get loud and shrill..
Master gonna offer up His seed to spill..
And when that seed spurts out his head..
Master gonna curl up with His Subbie, in bed..

Pretty rough draft, but itís a start.. Hope itís along the lines you were looking for..
Jim

NastyGuy
06-30-2005, 05:04 PM
Dubblz-
Ya know, sometimes what comes from my suggestions to others is better than what I imagined. I'm not into dom/sub, and usually skip that kind of thing, but I went through your lullaby from beginning to end (twice) because it made me laugh! Very creative! Keep up the excellent work! :grin:
Any chance of someone recording it? I'd love to listen to an MP3 of this song.
-NastyGuy

NastyGuy
06-30-2005, 05:07 PM
I was thinking that it would be nice to actually hear some of these songs. Any chance someone can perfrom them and post them as mp3 or MIDI files?
-NastyGuy

Sugarsprinkles
06-30-2005, 05:49 PM
I know this would definitely keep me awake. Very nice, Dubblz........very nice indeed.

PantyFanatic
06-30-2005, 06:52 PM
Hush Little Subbie

*OOooooops* Wrong thread.:o Sorry :D
I thought this was another message from my government.








...... WAIT! I think it is! :eek:

Lilith
06-30-2005, 08:22 PM
That was great! I loved it!

wyndhy
06-30-2005, 09:33 PM
dubblz, that was awesome!

Dubblz
07-01-2005, 09:34 PM
NastyGuy...Glad you liked it..I had a good time writing it as well..Actually wanted to add more to it,but got impatient..

SugarSprinkles...I've seen your pics..They keep me up,too!!..oh wait..different kind of up,there..

PantyFanatic...You're the reason I wanted it to be longer..Wanted to get panties in there,too..Next time,for sure..Couldn't be a gov't or big Brother thing..No Incest..

Lilith...OK..Gotta admit it..Had a feeling you might like this one..(no message attached there)..Oh,and thx for resetting it for me..Some day I might figure out what I'm doing,lol..

WYNDHY..Can't say how Happy it makes me that people like the scribblings of a madman..thx..(not meant to be an insult)

:halo: