Feeback on Midnight storm

[1nutworld]

Hey Pixies gang,
Feel free to give me some feedback on the story.

Good, bad or otherwise.


Thanks

Midnight Storm (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?p=974074#post974074)

[imaginewithme]

OMG I love it. I wish something like that would happen to me!
Very good!