The Visitor by Roxiebda

[Lilith]

click here (http://216.150.92.84/forums/showthread.php?p=882911#post882911)

Great story! When I read the line "charge of the lust brigade" I nearly shot iced tea out my nose!

Thanks for sharing it with us!

[fzzy]

Yep, excellent story ... I especially enjoyed the underlying humor going through the entirety. Welcome to Pixies!

[roxiebda]

Thanks so much guys, I am always a little nervous about others reading my work, but want to get feedback so that I can improve!

I love your site, it is erotic fiction heaven! I feel like a child in a Candies 'R Us! Lol! Don't know where to start, and want to read everything at once!

Thanks again for the encouragement!

[wyndhy]

yep, yep! great story, roxie

[roxiebda]

Thanks Wyndhy,

I appreciate you taking the time to respond, and am very glad you liked it!

Cheers,

Roxi