Feedbacl on "Unexpected Work"

[flywater]

Please take a min to read my newest work, would really love feedback and constructive critisism! Thank you all! it is in Boy/Girl stories. Thank you all!

Unexpected work (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?t=23864)

[imaginewithme]

That's a wonderful story!!!! Great work flywater!

[Stolen Kisses]

Flywater,

Great story. I really liked that the whole story was being told to "her". Cant wait to ready more of your stuff.

Barb