Feedback on my second story Instructor and the Student

[Mark Vieth]

Hey everyone. I just wanted some feedback on the second story of mine. It's under the boy/girl category. It's called "the instructor and student." Anyway let me know what you all think of it so far

Instructor and the Student (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?t=23826)

[Stolen Kisses]

Mark-

Great story. Loved it!

[Mark Vieth]

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