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lakritze
08-30-2003, 05:25 PM
May I touch? said he...How much?said she.... A lot said he...Why not said she....Lets go said he...Not too far said she....Whats too far?said he...Where you are said she....May I stay? said he...Which way?said she...Like this he said....If you kiss she said...May I move?said he...Is it love? said she...If your'e willing said he...but you're killing said she...But it's life said he...but your wife said she...Now..said he...OWW! said she...Tip top said he...Don't stop said she...Oh no said he..Go slow said she....... CCCCome said he...UMMMMM said she...You are divine said he...You are mine said she...... Words by ee commings

Lilith
08-30-2003, 05:30 PM
<~~~~ is giggling... that was precious;)

dicksbro
08-30-2003, 05:34 PM
LMAO, lakritze. Terrific.

osuche
08-30-2003, 05:57 PM
You actually have punctuation and capitalization. Unusual for ee cummings. But I love it!

darogle
08-30-2003, 11:02 PM
you have to love...ee cummings...hard to read....at times...but worth it

Sharni
08-31-2003, 02:33 AM
OoooooKayyyyyyyy :)

mindboxer505
09-02-2003, 12:10 PM
LOL......brilliantly done !