Hi everyone! This is my first attempt at erotic writing. This was written yesterday and this morning at work, in between tours. I'll appreciate all of your comments! :)

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That day, I was working at the pool til 8:30. Lifeguarding is fun, but the heat of the indoors pool was worse than ever during that public swim. Things passed normally: reminding kids to walk, not to run; bandaid-ing minor scratches and cuts; telling the kids to please get off the lane marker before they break it. It was a busy night with lots of running around: there were over 60 people in the water. My partner blew the whistle at exactly 8:30 and relief from a long day being over washed over me.

My partner, Greg, wasted no time getting dressed and leaving. I, however, stayed to take a shower. By the time I was done putting away all the toys and mopping up the puddles, it was getting close to 9, when the sport center closed. Jeremy at the front desk knew about my habit of staying later though, and trusted me to lock up behind me before I left.

Jeremy was 2 years older than me and I had had a secret crush on him for years. Secret because he always seemed to attract the social butterflies, so I always figured I'd be of no interest to him. But the man is gorgeous, truly he looks like a god. His curly long dark hair and beautiful green eyes always make me melt. He is strong, but his strength is hidden by his thin body. A volleyball player, he has perfectly chiselled abs and a smile sexy enough to make you faint. But unlike most beautiful men, he's not self-centered... Actually, he's one of the nicest men I've ever met.

The girls' locker room was deserted when I went for my shower, and I knew that no one else would come in tonight. The water spewing from the showerhead was still warm, and I started washing my hair with my citrus-scented shampoo. I was peeling off my swimsuit when I heard a voice from behind me, "Would you like some company?"

Whirling around, I saw Jeremy standing there, already taking off his shirt, his sexiest smile on his face. My answering grin widened when he lowered his pants, throwing them to the corner. "I've locked the front door already... We're completely alone," he told me, taking my hand and bringing it to his lips.

"Follow me," I told him, leading him back to the pool. I could fell his eyes burning into my ass as I swayed sexily. Once we got to the side of the pool, he quickly caught me into his arms, gave me a head-spinning kiss and then smoothly dove into the water before I had a chance to react. What could I do but dive in after him?

When I caught up with him, he was sitting on the top step of the ladder, just on top of the water, his smiling eyes looking out at me from behind the water drops stuck on his long lashes. His naked body was magnificent, his cock already hard, anticipating. I swam up between his legs, eager to taste him. He gasped when I touched the tip of my tongue to his head, slightly thrusting his hips, wanting more. I caressed his balls with one hand as I slowly lowered my mouth, taking his entire head then more. I sucked strongly on him while his gentle hands caressed my breasts, brushing over my nipples, making them harden and making me wet. When I felt that he was close to cumming, I lifted my head. He slipped from the ladder, then lifted me up to the top step and started teasing my nipples with his mouth and my pussy with his hand. My back arched when his thumb found my nub, encouraging him to plunge two fingers into my soaking wetness, my cries proof of my pleasure. "Hurry," I told him breathlessly, "I need your cock! Oh, please..."

"Not yet," he teased as he brought his mouth lower to my pussy. The pleasure, oh! the pleasure his tongue brought to me was incredible, and I started shaking with an orgasm, my cries echoing in the empty stands.

Then he stood up, opening my legs wider, positioning himself between them. He slowly pushed his hard cock into me, making me feel every inch with a sharp distinct pleasure. Our kisses were breathless, passionate as he started thrusting slowly. God, he felt so good, and our moans joined the sound of the lapping water. My pussy clinged to him ever so tightly as he began to thrust faster. He brought his hand down between our bodies finding my nub, now franctically thrusting. I felt the pleasure building up again, higher, higher, and I burst into another time-stopping orgasm as I felt him cum inside me.

We held on to each other tightly as we came down from our peak, speechless. Our breathing had slowed down when I finally looked into his eyes, and our simultaneous smiles only made us grin more. "So," he said, "How about that shower now?"

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Si à travers nos veines coule encore le sang...
Si dans les jeux d'enfants on entend encore l'accent...
Si nous sentons encore l'espoir de nos grands-parents...
Si dans les voiles du large souffle encore le vent...
Y'a jamais eu de Grand Dérangement.

Pixie that was an excellent story !
I think I will take those swimming lessons from you now !!!

I hope this is just the start of many stories from you !

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The Special One!

Great first story PS, really got me goin

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Simply amazing Sprite...love it!! God it brings back memories!!..lol

Excellent Pixiesprite!!!!!!

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great story PixieSprite! got my all tingly and hard :p

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~I love Nikki~

Hmmmmmmmm next time im swimming........i want that lifeguard to come and rub my cramp in my leg.......(upper part of my leg....that is)........hehehe

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"In love there are no rules".......Bono

Oh that is soooooo good PS I got hard thinking of you being pleasured, mmmm I just might change my name to Jeremy :)

Thanks everyone for your great comments!!!!! :p There's another story brewing in my head right now... I just have to find the right words :)

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Si à travers nos veines coule encore le sang...
Si dans les jeux d'enfants on entend encore l'accent...
Si nous sentons encore l'espoir de nos grands-parents...
Si dans les voiles du large souffle encore le vent...
Y'a jamais eu de Grand Dérangement.

PS --

You naughty girl, but a great story.

CK

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PS,

Your writing is excellent. Your command of english suggests that you should follow this skill. Do you write at work?

Kendall

Pixie........Wow! Wonderful story! TY so much for sharing....you have a knack for this.....please write again!

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That was great! Anymore to come? ;)

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Hey Pixie that was a great story,, "Would love to see more"..

That >^,^<