Folks-
I thought I might do something a little different. This time I'm going to post a story in its rough form, bad grammar, misspellings and all. There has been no editing to this story at all, so you may even see contradictory statements from the beginning to the end of the story.

I'd love to see some comments as to what you think needs to be done to polish this story: What needs to be fleshed out, or focused on less; what gets repeated endlessly, or what needs to be clarified. Also, any glaring mistakes I made should be pointed out.

Also, I would love to see some of the other authors try this. I'd be great to see how some of you work!

-NastyGuy