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I really liked the way you took the time to VB code it all. It made it much easier for the "voices" in my head to change between characters. It was fun and hot all at the same time. I have a friend who suffers and must go take care of things in the stall at work too so I really liked the premise of this story! Great Job!

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Thanks Lilith! It was fun writing something that relied so heavily on dialog. As I typed in the VB code, I figured this was what William Faulkner felt like when he wrote the "Sound and the Fury" in all those different color inks. *LOL*

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but completely against my will,
and yes he did things to me,
things of which I dream of still,"

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WOW! What a wonderfully erotic story. Glad I didn't read it at work as I would have been gone a little longer than usual!

Jaylene, new member here so just read your story, now I have to go relieve myself then look for other stories you have written.