04-19-2004, 08:00 PM
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Our Drive Home Together by imaginewithme
Hey ya'll!
Check out my latest story and let me know what you think. I feel like I have ran out of ways to have sex!!!! UGGGG
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04-19-2004, 09:51 PM
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Kissing Your Soft Parts!
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Re: Our Drive Home Together by imaginewithme
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Originally posted by imaginewithme
Hey ya'll!
Check out my latest story and let me know what you think. I feel like I have ran out of ways to have sex!!!! UGGGG
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Mmmmmmm! You haven't met me yet!
I have such an inventive mind! Care to cum into my lab and be my guinea pig - errr partner!?
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04-19-2004, 09:59 PM
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Kissing Your Soft Parts!
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Drive home
I definitely like the action!
It is always good to get another person to proofread it for simple errors and get Word or another good editor to check for tense and other grammar errors. Failing that, I do volunteer editing.
Another big plus will be to tell the reader what you are feeling while the action is throbbing. Give him something to say. A bit of dialog mixed in spices things up nicely.
There are many approaches to hot erotica. You can read authors you enjoy a great deal and carefully note how they do it. Good writing is an artform and a bit of science mixed pleasantly.
You have passion. Just sprinkle on some of the afore-mentioned seasoning, and you have a sure winner!
Kisses!
Frank
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04-19-2004, 10:22 PM
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THank you so much for your input.......
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04-19-2004, 10:41 PM
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sorry I don't know a thing about writing ,
I do know hot though and you always get me !
loved the story looking forward to more
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04-19-2004, 11:56 PM
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Thank you Way22HOTTTTTT.....you're hot yourself and so sweet to me.
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11-29-2005, 07:07 AM
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wow
Delicious story - can I give you a lift home?
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11-29-2005, 11:19 AM
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Thank you GusAspar!!!!
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11-29-2005, 05:54 PM
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They are good stories aren't they?
I read one and ended up reading them all... horny stuff.
I don't know about anyone else, but i'd love to see more... although i apreciate time may be dificult for IWM right now.
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11-29-2005, 05:57 PM
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Not there yet.....
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Yes I enjoy her hot stories..... maybe when her imagination is running on the wild side we'll read more!!!
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11-29-2005, 06:08 PM
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Thanks alspals and Coaster.... means a lot.
Hopefully sometime soon I'll think of something to write.
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12-09-2005, 09:01 PM
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Just me.
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You are so talented. Of course, I knew that, but your stories just add to that impression. You are very good.
Thumbs up to a terrific lady!
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10-06-2006, 05:28 PM
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its been a while since i read these... but they still work for me!
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