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Old 04-04-2003, 12:25 PM
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My best Salesperson

I hope I'm posting this correctly.
This is my first attempt at story writing.
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My Best Salesperson

As I walk into the conference room you are busy
preparing for the afternoon meeting.
I can’t help but catch my breath as you sort and stack
all of the paperwork at each of the spots along the
table. You still haven’t noticed me as you bend over
the back of one of the chairs to catch a pencil that
has rolled to the middle of the table. Watching the
hem of your short black dress rise up the back of your
thighs I feel even shorter of breath. I can’t help but
wonder if you are wearing stockings or pantyhose.
Hiring you was easily one of the best decisions I have
made since starting this company. Don’t misunderstand
me you are way more than just eye candy for the
office, no you are one of the best sales persons I
have ever seen.

I quietly walk up behind you and put my hand on your
shoulders and ask if you are ready for the big
presentation. After your initial shock you begin to
relax as I begin to gently massage your shoulders and
neck. You say that it’s a done deal and the clients
will never know what hit them. I admire your
confidence. I lean closer and gently kiss the back of
your neck and whisper I hope so. If we land this
contract the business will be set for years and I will
personally make sure you are rewarded handsomely. As
I begin to slide my hands down your arms and place
them on your slender waist I pull you closer to me and
gently nibble on your ear. I know how much you like
that. You make a soft purring sound which only excites
me more. The smell of your dark hair and perfume are
as fragrant as any flower ever grown.

Slowly I slid one hand down the outside of you leg
pausing to play with the lace at the hem of your
dress. You take a deep breath and ask teasingly just
what I think I’m doing. Just making sure you aren’t
tense I reply. Well maybe I am just a little tense, do
you think you can help? I assure you I would like to
try. What do you think might do the trick? You answer
That you have no complaints so far. Still nibbling at
the nape of your neck I begin to slide my hand up the
silky smoothness of your thigh. Up and under the edge
of your dress. There I find more lace. I smile as I
realize that it is stockings and not hose. You know
how much they excite me. So sexy and feminine just
like you.

With my other hand I reach around and begin to
gently caress your breast. I marvel at the firm but
yet soft feel. Another part of you that is perfectly
formed. I can feel the nipple begin to stiffen in
response to my touch. I turn you around to face me and
look deep into your brown eyes. I see a small fire
burning in them. I lean closer and gently kiss your
soft lips. The temperature in the room rises as our
kisses become deeper with passion and I let my hands
roam all over you. I kiss my way your jaw and down
your throat into your cleavage.
I feel your hands run through my hair as a low moan
escapes your mouth. I grab the cheeks of your ass and
look back up into your eyes. The fire there seems to
be bigger now.

I kneel in front of you and slowly push the hem of
your dress up around your waist. This revels to my
hungry eyes a sheer thong, which matches your
stockings. I waste no time and pick you up and sit
you on the edge of the table. Then I begin kissing one
of your nylon covered legs starting at your knees and
slowly moving upwards. When I reach the top of your
stocking I go back down and start the same process on
your other leg. I glance upwards at the crotch of your
panties, is that a wet spot I see? I decide to inspect
closer. I kiss you through the thin material and feel
your body softly tremble. Please no more teasing you
ask.
Yes my dear I reply as I slide the panties down your
legs and over your high heels. I pause just a second
to notice your red toenails exposed through the end of
your shoe. I think about taking the time to play with
them but I made a promise. Now that you are fully
visible to me I can smell how excited you are. I love
the view I have of you as you have shaved part of your
pubic hair leaving a small V shaped area on top, which
is neatly trimmed. I can also see that you are getting
very damp as I begin to kiss and lick you. You grab
the back of my head and pull me into the center of
you. I love the feel of your stockings tickling my
ears. As my tongue begins to explore I can taste your
juices. I notice that your breathing is much deeper
and labored now. Next I slide one of my fingers inside
you and am amazed at the heat. There I find that one
little spot that you love to have rubbed. I stop with
my mouth long enough to look up and ask if you like
this. Your eyes are glazed as you say yes and plead
for me to continue. My tongue finds the magic button
of your clit and I begin to suck lightly on it. Oh yes
more of that you beg. There is no way I would ever
stop now. I add a second finger and slide them slowly
in and out of you. You are grinding your hips into my
face almost making it impossible for me to catch a
breath. Then I feel your muscles deep inside quiver
around my fingers. You are moaning for me to keep
going. Oh yes…yes! Now! Oh please now! More oh please
more! You begin to bite your hand to keep from
screaming as you come all over my face. I try my best
to catch all of it with my mouth but there is too much
as it runs down my chin and drips off.
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Old 04-04-2003, 12:26 PM
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Part 2

****Story was to long to post at once so her is patrt 2**********


As I stand up you say I need you inside me and begin
to frantically unfasten my pants. These words are
music to my ears as there is no place I’d rather be.
You lick the palm of your hand and begin to slowly
stroke me. Just the touch of your hands feels
wonderful but I know there are far better sensations
to come. You kiss me and run your tongue deep inside
my mouth as I fondle your breasts. I want you too I
say as you guide me towards you. You slide me back and
fourth across your wet crease then place my tip inside
you. Slowly I begin to push inward until I am fully
inside you. I feel you lock your legs around my waist.
There aren’t words to describe how great you feel
around me. So hot. Wet. So tight it’s as if we were
built for each other. I begin to exit just as slowly
until just my head remains. Looking back into your
eyes I start over. Nice and slow. I continue this for
what seems like hours. Then as our hunger grows the
pace has to quicken also. I push you onto your back on
the table. I notice your nipples are straining to tear
through your clothes as you begin to squeeze your
breasts. You are surely a sight to behold with your
dress up over your waist and your lower half exposed.
It looks like we are one creation instead of two the
way we are joined together. I take your legs and pull
them up onto my shoulders. Did it feel like just a
little more of me slid inside you? You moan with
approval. “Please faster. Just fuck me faster!” How
can a man made of flesh and blood refuse that? You
know how much I enjoy it when you talk dirty. I begin
to lick one of your ankles that is resting on my
shoulder. I ask you what you want. “More!” you answer”
I want you to fuck me as fast and hard as you can.”
I grab your hips to hold you steady and pound away at
you for all I’m worth. I tell you that I’m going to
fuck you till you can’t sit still for a week. You move
one of your hands from your breast down across your
stomach to play with your self. I watch as you make
small circular motions with your fingers on your self.
Then I feel you shudder as you close your eyes and
come for the second time. Again I feel you drench me
with come. You have such a powerful climax that all
ability to speak is gone. I stop moving and just rest
while deep inside you till you can gather your senses.
That was amazing you say after a short rest. Your
welcome is all I can add. Then you tell me it’s my
turn as you push me from between you legs. You stand
long enough to kiss me and turn me till me back is to
the table. Grabbing me you pull on of the chairs over
to sit in. You flash me with that mischievous smile of
yours and wink. Again you begin to stroke me while
looking into my eyes. You notice the small amount of
clear fluid that has oozed from me and ask what is
this. Have you sprung a leak? But before I can answer
you lean forward and lick it away. Now it’s my turn
to moan. You then begin to lick all around my head
paying special attention to that spot on the bottom of
my shaft. You begin toying with me next letting just
the first couple of inches slide in your mouth. There
you run your tongue all around me while lightly
sucking. You stop and ask if I like that and as I
begin to speak you go all the way down on me. My
answer sounds like some form of Chinese. You begin
bobbing up and down on me and I am in Heaven. You
begin alternating between slow and fast strokes as
well as deep and shallow. I reach down to grab your
head but you shake away from me. You tell me that you
are in control now for me to just enjoy. I answer
that I don’t think I can take much more. You flash
that smile again and say that was your whole
intention. You tell me that you want to make me come
and you won’t stop till I do. You slide me all the way
back down and begin to hum as if you are enjoying this
as much as I am. This sends me over the edge I feel
myself beginning to swell. I tell you that I’m going
to come and you never take your mouth off of me and I
swear I can see that smile on your face also. Then
the whole world melts in my brain. You grab my hips
and hold me closer to you as I explode. You are
watching my face the whole time you swallow me. My
knees don’t want to support my weight any more so I
have to lean against the table to steady myself. You
stand and help me tuck my shirt and fasten my pants.
You pick up your panties and put them in my pants
pocket for luck during the meeting you say. We share
one last deep kiss then you tell me to go back to my
deck we only have thirty minutes till the meeting. As
I start down the hall to my office I smile because I
know the clients don’t stand a chance against you.
That account is definitely in the bag!
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Old 04-05-2003, 11:18 AM
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OK
Let me have it.
does this story suck?
If it does I would love advice aboutwhere I need to improve.
Especially from some of you other writers.
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Old 04-05-2003, 11:39 AM
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Great story! Loved the way you told it! Looking forward to more!
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Old 04-05-2003, 02:23 PM
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Well told story .... also a wonderful story!! :)
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Old 04-06-2003, 12:25 PM
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Bardog Very hot story. Hope you continue with this as maybe the aftermath of the meeting. Hope to see more of your stories.
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Old 04-07-2003, 08:05 PM
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definitely got me going ;) :D
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