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Old 03-19-2003, 08:27 AM
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No need to be ashamed shyabusa .... there's no time limit! LOL!!! As always ... I look forward to hearing your comments whenever you have something to say!
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Old 03-21-2003, 06:34 PM
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Beautifully Written

Can I just say, "You have a gift for writing!!"

From the begginning we can see that John is a bit on the dominant side, (something I personally love) and we just see that evolve wonderfully. The maid loves to please and to be pleased, but she also willingly submits to John. You played off of their relationship well in the second part, when she had to dust the picture and he was conveniently in the way. You displayed it again in the third part when he makes her finish cleaning with the Maid still in an orgasmic haze and their juices still fresh in her pussy.

I was also wondering if we were ever going see the neighbors show up, but you delivered magnificently as always.

You always know exactly what to deliver. I can't help but repeat again that you are truly gifted!

In short: Wonderfully Orgasmic!!

Keep 'em cumming...
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Old 03-22-2003, 07:39 AM
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Ah shucks shyabusa ... you do go on so (and I enjoy it as well) .... glad you enjoyed the story of John and the Maid .... personally, I'm the WORST housekeeper on record! But this has been a fun story to tell anyway! Thanks for your very nice compliments!!!!!
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