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Old 04-26-2007, 04:20 PM
cellaphanepants cellaphanepants is offline
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Feedback on "Panties or Not?"

I have been writing stories for my wife for a while. She loves them, but I'd like to hear what you guys think.

I also wrote "Late Night Sessions" .

More to cum.
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Old 04-26-2007, 04:26 PM
sunshine sunshine is offline
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You, my dear, ROCK.

That was a GREAT story! (Thanks for the props in there too. )

I like the part about the mirror. Great addition.

Clearly, you and I think along the same lines when it comes to what's sexy.

Good job.

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Old 04-26-2007, 04:32 PM
sunshine sunshine is offline
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PS:

The other story is totally hot too.

If your wife writes good stuff too, ask her if you can post it!

You write a great mix of romance and heat. I love it.


Sunshine
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