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Old 10-11-2005, 02:33 PM
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Feedback on Revenge is sweet by dm383

Ok...you've got my attention.


I like where this is going.


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For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul.

Complete surrender should not just come at moments in which one faces overwhelming odds, but in the calm when it seems one is personally in complete control of one's life.

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Old 10-12-2005, 03:46 AM
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Ok...you've got my attention.


I like where this is going.


Revenge



I take it you're ready for part two then WI?

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Old 10-13-2005, 10:54 AM
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He PMed me saying he was ready for part three.

Wonderful writing, DM! More, please.
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Old 10-13-2005, 12:15 PM
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He PMed me saying he was ready for part three.

Wonderful writing, DM! More, please.


Four more parts to go......... keep reading hun! Thansk for the feedback - it means a lot.

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