I can't believe no one has commented on this yet! It's pretty well written.....in that I can "see" into the scene and imagine all the people and their personalities in just the small amount written so far. It's a bit scary...the force factor that is.....but very interesting none the less! I like your imagination and even if it isn't my cup of tea to write about.......I'll surely read more if you'd like to continue!

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