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Lilith 12-31-2003 09:20 AM

A Little Fun At Work by Jaylene
 
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I really liked the way you took the time to VB code it all. It made it much easier for the "voices" in my head to change between characters. It was fun and hot all at the same time. I have a friend who suffers:D and must go take care of things in the stall at work too so I really liked the premise of this story! Great Job!

Jaylene 01-04-2004 04:51 PM

Thanks Lilith! It was fun writing something that relied so heavily on dialog. As I typed in the VB code, I figured this was what William Faulkner felt like when he wrote the "Sound and the Fury" in all those different color inks. *LOL*

darkangel37 01-05-2004 03:42 PM

WOW! What a wonderfully erotic story. Glad I didn't read it at work as I would have been gone a little longer than usual!

naughtyandy4u 01-30-2010 03:31 PM

Jaylene, new member here so just read your story, now I have to go relieve myself then look for other stories you have written.


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