no begining & no end
 

As I am what I refer to as being a 'newbe' here,
I assume, from what I understand, that this is
where you post words that others interact with.

I also understand that generaly, althought
I have not looke deeper, those words form a story.
Not wanting to break with tradition,
nor do I wish to sterp on the toes of others,
I post an erotic poem I wrote a few years ago.

Perhaps it needs a begining or maybe and end?
you deside.

Erotic51 :)


Erotica

I woke early this morning to find
you were a dream of the erotic kind.
We held each other in a tight embrace
you lay next to me face to face.
I whispered sweet nothing in your ear
you drew me to you ever nearer.
I kissed your neck and licked your lips
you opened your mouth accepting the kiss.
As our tongues touched and we soared higher
you moaned and moved as though on fire.
Tracing lines on your arms and legs
you pulled me closer to your breasts.
Taking each nipple between my lips
you began to sway and move your hips.
I started kissing and licking lower and lower
you trembled and shook like a blossoming flower.
My lips wandered over your soft thighs
you parted your legs to reveal a surprise.
A trimmed bush shone with delicate delight
you opened your womanhood to my touch and sight.
The wetness glistened on your fragrant skin
you let loose your aroma and inviting me in.
I felt the delicate touch of your hand and fingers
you held my manhood with gentle lingers.
When I gently moved into your tunnel of love
you spread yourself as I entered from above.
As we moved together in harmonic motion
you continued to flood me with your magic lotion.
Our bodied entwined with sweat and heat
you moved with me like a single heart beat.
The moment took hold and we held each other tight
you were filled with flashes of colour and light.
We roared together as essence of life poured forth
you stretched your body accepting me in it's course.
When the passion subsided and the moment was best
you kissed me gently falling into peaceful loving rest.

Erotic51

ummm lots of viewers, but no comments? ummm guess you get that :)

Thankyou for sharing this!!!
 

Wow! That was beautiful....

have you written others?

wow. very good! I don't think I can add to that.

thank you both RandyGal and Ash for you encouraging comments. I have in fact written a few (20ish) erotic storied, but I am waiting on the webmaster of this site to post the first one. Guess as soon as its up (hehehe) I will let you know. Regards :)

Am I able to rate this thread or should someone else have that privilege? Or am I being a little too presumptuous to assume this is a good poem? :)