Who Was It

[the_phantom]

Well I finally got my first story into Pixies-Place.

Please let me know what you think, I have a few more but would like to hear some feedback to make sure I am on the right path.

Thanks in advance

Phantom

[X Girl]

My God,
That was perfect.
X Girl

[thedarkangel]

LOVED the story phantom. Definitely made me hott.

[dobbydog]

Good job. Suspense, not coarse, still had the elements of conquest and control, in a semi-sweet context. Sexy and arousing, nice ending.

[dobbydog]

Just did this. Please check my posted comments. Nice job. - Masterstyr

[hidinfreak]

i lovedit i only wishthat would ahppen tomeon a stromie night