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BIGMAC
08-14-2001, 07:38 PM
Wow!! What a great story. Other than a few typo's there isn't much to be critical about. Well written and action packed. If you write any more stories, please let me know. (wicked smile)
dobbydog
08-17-2001, 08:33 AM
i like!!!!!!
dobbydog
10-11-2001, 05:55 AM
很好很好
我喜欢
looga
12-16-2001, 07:19 PM
Good story line. Lead in well done, small climaxes run up to main and hold interest all the time. Well done !!!!!!.
Violentj
01-25-2002, 11:21 AM
great story
wbill009
03-30-2002, 05:59 PM
This one great story . I real hope to see more of your work .
:p
dobbydog
05-17-2002, 04:58 AM
Oh, my God! That was so fucking amazing! My only complaint? That I had to stop reading occasionally to masturbate! I was saddened to reach the end of the story, but I must admit that I was eager to give full attention to my own pussy! Well written and very expressive! A+++++++ I look forward to seeing more of your work on this site. You are a literary genius!
Amanda
dobbydog
06-15-2002, 09:32 AM
i have to wank now
Unregistered
07-21-2002, 01:16 AM
GOD DAMN THATS SOME GOOD SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Unregistered
07-31-2002, 08:37 PM
This takes the prize. Perfect for finger-fucking my dripping cunt to many raging orgasms throughout the length of the tale. It gives me great ideas to try out with my boyfriend and bi-girlfriend. but for now, my hands are going to be busy pleasuring my tits and pussy. Love this fuck-story!!
Unregistered
08-11-2002, 12:49 AM
My man and I read this story together, naked, me on his lap with his huge cock stuffed in my hot, dripping pussy - we fucked and had a few shattering orgasms. This is a great story!!
Unregistered
10-22-2002, 02:26 AM
that story was great,i came and came and came.i couldn't stop shooting cum.i want to read more like this...
Unregistered
01-19-2003, 08:34 AM
OMG!!!!! That was amazing. One of the best stories I have read. I hope to read more from you soon
Unregistered
02-11-2003, 01:16 PM
great story but could have been made more dirty with some more anal action and rimming.